2009年5月21日 星期四

Karen's Weight-loss Tips

Karen was fat last month. She want to lose weight in this cummer vacation, so she joged every morning and did some exercises. She wasn't eat junk-food.
Now she loses ten kilometer.

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  1. Hello, there.
    1. She want to lose weight in this cummer vacation
    → she wants to lose weight this summer vacation.
    2. so she joged every morning and did some exercises.
    → so she goes jogging every morning.
    3. She wasn't eat junk-food.
    → She doesn't eat junk food.
    4. Now she loses ten kilometer.
    → Now she has lost ten kilograms.

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